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I'm confused,
I'm dazed.
I don't know what the hell,
Is going on these days.
I feel this way,
but you make me feel like that.
Loving you shouldn't cause me harm.
Take the pain away with your overwhelming charm.
I'm so confused,
Everything is so new.
Could it be,
That I'm in love with you?
You smile at me,
I look away.
I don't know how to react,
I don't know why I feel this way.
My heart's in my mouth,
My stomach's tied in a knot.
When I think I know what I feel,
It's not.
I wish I could rot,
Burn and die.
You make me want to fly,
Can you explain to me this feeling cause I don't know why.
I want to kiss you,
But then I do not.
I don't know why
My feelings are tied in a knot.
What can I say?
I don't know
What can I do?
I love you?
I'm so confused,
The world is so gray.
Is it normal
To stare at the phone all day?
I can't think
I want to cry,
But still
I want to know why.
Could it be?
Is it true?
Would it be?
That I'm in love with you?
This is when I was young and "in love" with my first boyfriend Adam. Little did I know, love is much more powerful and contains so much more emotion than I thought it once did.
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:iconmrkaosx:
MrKaosX Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
Ah it is a good poem. :)
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beogradjanka Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2008
this is awesome!!!
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Chiainistic Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
yeah, me too
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emoxworldxwriter Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
I love this.
It's so nice, and actually, it's sort of how I feel right now. <3

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Phoxzorz Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
:D! Great writing! And yes, love is a powerful emotion. Sometimes it takes control over your entire emotions, and you end up so dumfoudly confused. >_>
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Lynntendo Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2004
Aw, I like this one Jazmyn. Hindsight is always 20/20, and all that rot.
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